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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2005-10-12 10:31 AM


Under autumn leaves
The horror
Exposed—

A suddenly
Small girl
Shaking
In your arms
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Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
1 posted 2005-10-12 09:05 PM

this is good for a dark poem thanks for sharing this chilling piece

-may the force be with you in poetry
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-10-12 10:11 PM

Wow the poor girl must be scared, bless her heart, thanks for sharing, nice write.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-23 01:40 AM

someone just can not enjoy the autumn fun. or the old story. either is pleasent.
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