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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I will walk with the sad stones today there at the life river place where spirits are drawn in sand by metal hands soulless there will be voices in the rooms but there will be no wind and freedom will be behind the eyes where a search for god is hurried I knew of this man before, in his eyes I knew of him, before he spoke of the trees and now that he recognizes me we laugh at the ashen that makes widows today I will truly be his brother ______________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sad, but very very beautifully written, as you always do, your talent and ability to mince words with nature's perspective is outstanding.... Hugs to ya Mr. Sensi... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Friday is my day to do the same~~~  M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've read a lot of your poems, for the lessons in how to write; and some I've re-read because they moved me deeply....this poem and one other, also recent, more than any others. I'll let this response suffice for both. Deep currents....thank you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Following along with what Ed said because I didn't have the right words. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
this one wet my eyes, yanno holding a well worn stone in my mind tonight |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks to you all am watching a friend work his way through the dark curtains.. thanks again |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Beautifully written. My heart goes out to you ... hugs dear friend. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ There is a feeling of tendering of keep in this gentle penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this was a very sweet right, you showed very good feeling by this person, and such a wonderful tale that is in this too. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
To read your words, is truly a wonder and gift to all... to have your friendship? A blessing... but then you knew I would say this...   One, of many I call  live for today, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your work is always captivating... but this one will keep my attention for a long, long time... This is absolutely excellent!! |
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