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Open Poetry #36

You don't love me

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2005-10-12 03:35 AM

I close my eyes
And I see you
Forever memorable
I smell you
As I sleep
I hear you
Forever lingering
I feel you

I know its naught
But a haunt
Tricks on my heart
By a tortured soul

My heart stays
Beating in your pocket
Forever
Beating in your pocket
Wasting away

You don't love me...

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-10-12 12:05 PM

Tanya~
Such a sad little piece with much beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-10-12 01:49 PM

Snatch your heart right back out of that pocket! You are a pretty young lady and are talented as well. You should never be sad.
Great write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-10-12 02:57 PM

your heart is as beautiful as that lovely smile of yours...don't stay down long, you've got way to much to share.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-10-12 03:54 PM

DM

I agree with my friends above!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-10-14 06:50 PM

Nice writing...James

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-10-14 07:05 PM

Oh, my. I feel the hurt in your poem. Miss Dragon Mistress, you convey emotion well. When I presume a poem is from someone's personal experience, I often find I'm mistaken. If this is from your own experience, I hope things brighten.
miscellanea

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