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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-10-10 03:34 AM


How can it be
Such soft white clouds
In the dark night sky

Stars that glimmer
The autumn air
Beauty awaiting her paramour
Beside the quiet sea
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
1 posted 2005-10-10 03:57 AM

I love the sky these days--

like honeydew melon and cantaloupe, and slivers of watermelon, fading blueberried stripe, splotched with random backlit kiwi.

Makes me wanna take a great big bite.

(chuckling...M.R.E.'s? suck)

yer poetry don't tho.
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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2 posted 2007-04-23 01:51 AM

very beautiful.
soft white clouds can be anything.
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