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Leash |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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She had just been taunted upset for having a pocketsized dog pulled away add that to a sequestered dad in custody all over again but the sweet small of relief was not far away If life is on a leash it comes undone sometimes.. she took hold of its empty end and did away with herself we still have no answers but the websites for help grow some parents teach their kids to do the same with a cord violent ends with no answers parents who tried to terminate their lives on a leash.. One girl had a dad who was constnatly arrested she'd go to bible class for the answer in the nave's stillness took hold of the empty leash instead dreaded to go home without daddy violent answer came to light yet she was supposed to be normal... but there were no abnormal signs no crazyness in being distraught a loved one is constantly carted away idea of family nucleus doesn't stay but in an attempt to take matters into her own eleven year old hands except maybe a sigh of relief or change in personality she wanted to promote dialogue life without daddy would be unbearable if she just adjusts the noose the answer in the stillness didn't come dreaded to go home on a setting sun.. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Martin, This is a very power write,one all parents should read. :-) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a poetic social commentary, tenderly written  Martin, thank you for this |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks Nancy.. by the way have an Alaskan fishing cap from friends that took a cruise up to around Juno from Vancouver.. Thanks Ella for reading |
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