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Open Poetry #36

A lovers plea

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-10-08 06:36 PM

my heart, my love,
please tell me
that you love me the same,
be with me this one instance,
and let here it be heard ,

your silence reveals nothing,
that I don’t know,
this feeling leaves me raided,
on your lips are my kisses,
Somehow they are ill gotten,

don’t push me away like a pest,
just look in my eyes,
and see the pain that is there,
without you in my future,
my soul will cease to be.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-10-08 09:08 PM

My goodness! Sounds like someone has been bitten by the love bug!

Well done. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2005-10-09 01:38 AM

Souls never really cease to be

at least I don't think so.

I love this.

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2005-10-09 06:00 PM

"don’t push me away like a pest,"

I feel your troubled spirit's lament.

And your plea is so romantic ... how can she push you away?

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2005-10-09 08:13 PM

This poem was written after we already broke up. Thanks for your support though.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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