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Caution |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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The Germans Had a weapon Called a Bouncing Betty If you set it off The thing would jump up About waist level And explode It’s best You understand girl I am watching you And you can’t do much harm To a scar |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...it's just like me to read a warning "caution" and enter anyway. A more ominous tone from your usual, but I liked the Bouncing Betty analogy much. Not what I am accustomed to from you, John, but I liked the edge, as I understand edges. I'd argue the scar thing tho. I've had one go keloid m'self.  Enjoyed, although I missed the zen of you in this'n.  It's good to be home and you are indeed, always an interesting and thoughtful read.  Know I read you always. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Caution is good. acar or not will all be hurting. good poems. |
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