A bond between Mother and Daughter

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Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-10-08 02:11 PM

As I gaze into my mothers eyes
I feel lost with pain
I feel so much desire to feel no sadness
nor to feel any kind of thought to live in vain

As I see in her eyes
The beauty
The light
Its caused by
the beauty she shares
The gifts she has shown with me

A chance to have a mother
Meansbig to me
It shows the love
The music
the emotion
The song of a luliby

Chances to have someone like this
Is very huge
I love you mama
I love you with all my heart
You are a big part of my life

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-10-08 02:16 PM

awww this is sweeet thank you for sharing big hugs

-may the force be with you in poetry

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-10-08 02:31 PM

Laura~
And your mom is fortunate to have a loving daughter to write something this sweet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

3 posted 2005-10-08 03:52 PM

This was nice, Angelheart!!

I am currently working on making the relationship with my mom a better one. Not that it's bad...it just hasn't reached the depth of what I hoped it would. Maybe someday...

Hugs for this...

~ Becka

Poetryatheart
Junior Member

since 2005-10-05

Posts 16
Jax, FL

4 posted 2005-10-09 01:05 PM

This is enough to make anyone cry, very touching and heart felting. Wonderful this is.

hope, love, is the value of poetry

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

5 posted 2005-10-09 01:11 PM

wonderful poem :-D!!!!! great compassion and love in this poem! i really enjoyed this, i think im going to have to show it to me mom. thanks for sharing!

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

6 posted 2005-10-10 01:36 PM

This is so cute. It made me smile.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-10-12 08:57 AM

Dear Angel-Hearted One ~

Knowing you as I do through reading your poetry, it is no wonder to me that you have such a loving mother! ~ for she has raised a very loving young woman ~ and daughter!

Love & Light,
EA

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2005-10-14 06:49 PM

what a beautiful bonding of love between mother and daughter and words on paper, as well! Very much enjoyed. Glad to hear the good things in life. So much negative on T.V. and the like. My visit here makes me miss my little girl! Smiling at ya!

miscellanea

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-10-14 07:07 PM

Nice...James

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2005-10-18 08:54 PM

Ah, mama's girl has made mama real proud.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

11 posted 2005-10-19 03:29 AM

So much love, certainly makes me miss my mum... a lot...

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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