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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Almond eyes Ringed In mind That prowled Hoping In gut That erupted Tense In parts That sought Enquiring In feelings That touched Seeking In doubt That hoped Desire In life That gave Herself In joy |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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I should have said it was a funny set of words You can read it straight or take the first line of each set and then read the second line of each set etc It is just playing Bodger |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very creative... I removed the first "Almond" post for you. You should be able to edit any of your posts clicking the little pensil and paper icon (there's actually 5 differnt icons I believe) at the top of the post. If this isn't working for you, email me and I will see if I can determine why. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Many thanks Michael I just write 5 words and then had the chance to sit down again and write the other words Bodger |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
interesting write thanks for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
An almond joy... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this. :-) |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks everyone Bodger |
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