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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In The In the vastness of this cosmic stage It is hard to think I fill a page This microcosmic wool of dust So full of rage so full of lust It is beyond my rift of thought That consciousness could live and court In epidemic skin and bone In dimensions that are sown It fills me with an epic fear And even rings a brine of tear To think above this sky and sea To think about the real of me It humbles me beyond compare And takes the wind out of my dare The weight of scale the weight of whale The voyage that a soul could sail Forgive me this tear of dew That every morning forms anew |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Bravo! See More... This is exactly how I feel, it gave me chills when I read it...but comfort in knowing I am not alone with these thoughts.. You are not only forgiven for your "tear of dew", but embraced for allowing it to fall on this page.. enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write this cool Saturday Sy! As always your words are full of truth and wisdom.  &  , Nancy~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Well said Seymour and well understood my friend, hang in there, all is good. Sincerely Rick |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....I'll go along with ice/Ford and his reply. I feel the same way too.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Enjoyed your comment very much. Nancy Rick Good to know you understand. Martie So glad I'm not alone. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'It is hard to think I fill a page' Oh, my friend ... but you do ... you do~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge For that you get a big |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully crafted piece! Flowed like a gentle breeze............ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It is hard to think I fill a page oh but you do.. with tear of dew... so beautiful  mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
marcel, Thank you for the read and reply Dark Angel Thank you too |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ohhhh, Sy, loving you more now, then ever before...making me ponder, I wonder if it's the way things were supposed to be...????? I don't think it was by coincidence? Forgive you? Heck, we love you.... wonderful write....thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you for your of words. |
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