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ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

0 posted 2005-10-06 08:21 PM

Close my eyes to forget what's here,
I close my eyes to disguise what is real.
Searching for some kind of tranquility,
just let me find you,
and be free.

You are letting go,
let me go, let me go, and fall down again.

I can see it all.
That hole,
I'm falling in.
Darkness calls,
I can hear it calling me.
Can't just sit and wait,
for divinity.

Silence falls,
as I disappear here
into all the darkness,
what is fear?
I can't find a way,
out of this,
hopeless existence.

Find a way, find a way, I must find a way to
give in now, and don't come back.
I won't feel it anyway.
I'm better off down here.
silent with no fear,
Disregard everyone and the cries I hear.
I've gone a way, never to return.
Slide away,
away from everyone.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-10-06 11:13 PM

well, Alice did that, and dontcha remember what happened?

BTW, welcome to Pips!

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-10-06 11:14 PM

wow

-may the force be with you in poetry

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-10-07 07:51 AM

if you challenge life, as well as you write, you'll soon be back up on a mountain of self perseverance, finding a greatness to it all...

yes, indeed, wow!

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

4 posted 2005-10-07 09:19 AM

Enjoyed and look forward to more.

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

5 posted 2005-10-07 06:06 PM

thank you all for the kind remarks. I look forward to reading and posting more poetry.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-10-07 11:25 PM

Why slide away from everyone....When i would like to read more of your words...and how you place them together!

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-10-09 10:10 PM

Love it

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