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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

0 posted 2005-10-06 08:01 PM

What smile can you give me
What word into my ear can you place,
So softly,
So sweetly,
That my dreams of you will but linger
The image of nothing but your face
There smiling
There sweetly,
Can you touch me in my stunned emotion
As I hurry of to sleep to dream
So softy and sweet
Of you and me.

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

1 posted 2005-10-06 08:04 PM

I can't understand how the words come out with such beauty and happiness. I guess it's possible, maybe I'll feel it one day too. It was very good, thank you.

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

2 posted 2005-10-06 08:06 PM

It’s easy, think with your heart and feel with your mind
But don’t mind the feeling, feeling is good.
Go tip toeing through the tulips
Or
Walk around a college campus
Lots of pretty flowers in both places

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-10-06 09:14 PM

Dennis~
This is such a lovely penning~

AND ... your reply to CR ...

'think with your heart and feel with your mind'

... just right~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-10-06 09:30 PM

lol, I have a brother Dennis,
who I nicknamed Meanass...oops,
I meant Menace, or did I?
~Welcome to Pips!~
I like the lighthearted feel of this write.

Poetryatheart
Junior Member

since 2005-10-05

Posts 16
Jax, FL

5 posted 2005-10-06 09:50 PM

this is a very nice write, and very good pointers on this too..... very lovely poem

hope, love, is the value of poetry

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-10-07 12:39 PM

Enjoyed...James

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

7 posted 2005-10-07 02:57 AM

Well thanky very much u-uns, warms my heart more than a double hot burrito
U all so kind

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2005-10-07 11:19 PM

beautiful words enough to make a heart melt...enjoyed!

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2005-10-14 07:28 PM

such a sweet and gentle write;

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