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Ratleader

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0 posted 2005-10-06 01:18 PM

Sunlight becomes her;
she wears it well,
softens the hard bright of it
blends warmth into its coolness
until it’s worthy of her smile.

Sunlight becomes her,
traces her traces, lines her lines
and at the touch, curves
to follow where she leads,
to shine for her a day of wishes
a promise of forever sunlit days.

Sunlight becomes her
and then, breaking forth all newness
in a smile for your hand alone,
your touch, reverent, sharing the glow,
her sunlight becomes you.

Martie

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1 posted 2005-10-06 01:24 PM

Ed...It sure does!! This gives me chills from the very love of it!!!

Sunshine

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2 posted 2005-10-06 01:38 PM

This poem becomes many...
thank you for the lilting lift!

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2005-10-06 01:55 PM

Thanks for the joy!

SG

Sharksbean
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jax

4 posted 2005-10-06 02:26 PM

this is a beautiful poem and the picture fits it perfectly thanks for sharing this awesome write

-may the force be with you in poetry

Obsidian Snow
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5 posted 2005-10-06 02:29 PM

A very bright and beautiful writing.

StevenS
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)

6 posted 2005-10-06 03:00 PM

Leather head + Tender heart= Beautiful Poetry :-)

Midnitesun

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Gaia

7 posted 2005-10-06 03:40 PM

a very nice presentation, Ed

Ratleader

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8 posted 2005-10-06 03:44 PM

That's Ed, Jr....of course!

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suthern

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9 posted 2005-10-06 04:39 PM

There is so much beauty and joy in the picture... so much beauty and joy in your words... They will treasure this forever... for it's a capture of love... created by love.

Congratulations, pappy-in-law! *S*

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

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Jacksonville,FL USA

10 posted 2005-10-06 05:45 PM

this is a good picture with a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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11 posted 2005-10-06 06:54 PM

I'm not getting the picture here, but, Ed, I sure do like this poem!

.....jo

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