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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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she writes tranquility, in parchment memoirs cascading rainbows of nautical ailment this dawn faired, seaworthy evening star, offers horizon’s work, in soft glowing vestment rhythmic structure, assumes her beacon to sooth a shattered countryside mode where we sometimes face a chance of rejection from the silent loins, of a plaintive world I’ve pondered her aura, coming to bloom She commits basic worth to a higher rung bounteous patience fills her room creative bursts of freedom young i witness with astonishment how she murmurs love without wait passion transcending, cherished fragrance in the excitement of her artistic parade we met by chance of unusual doings arising from her muse within and bide by still…greater evolutions drinking from her imaginative wineskin i cannot say where life will lead but know full well, the miracle of aging from seeds of love, she sprays with ease my life goes forth because of her paintings who’d have ever thought that nature’s timing, spoke fluid Portuguese? for a magnificent poet and friend I'm truly greatful for |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
LeeJ, You wrote with intentions other than to spotllight your poetic talents, but that seems to me to be the unintentional result of his piece, and in the procees you have touched a heart more deeply than you can imagine Amazing, my friend Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I have to go along with Elizabeth on this one. Good morning sweet. |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
Agreed, an amazing writing of color and love. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lee, this is a lovely write. A friend such as this truly is a blessing. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is a very lovely poem thank you for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ....This sounds like someone I know....truely she is blessed to have your friendship's praise.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Let me tell you just how GOOD this is ... I knew who she was before I reached the ending~ THAT is some fine penning, dear poetess~ Hi also to LovelyLizzyLady~  *Huglets* BOTH ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Beautiful write of a beautiful friendship. SG |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with all the sentiment above. But then, YOU are that way. Beautiful Lee J. JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Lee... and I am sure much appreciated not only by us but the one it was written for.  Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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