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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we knelt at the jordon it has carpet now there and the water is clear bottled by some gentile but sold by our brethren at a plus tax and recycle benchmark above dasani but ours is holier than thou you looked womanly in your ball cap and the tee that clung to your self development via goldsteins constructive process the digital candles were blessed our allergies didn't suffer the burning wax sacrifices or the stains on jordon's new pile and forgiveness closed at a convenient 8:30 _____________ dark scribnote: based upon a almost true discussion about world economic structure at the circle k on vinyard.. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-06-2005 09:22 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this places a precious smile on the readers face...soft spoken yet, the visuals are dressed in greatness.... enjoyed |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
world economy, certainly an ever changing subject. I wish to be an invisable force listening to your conversations. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So now that you've successfully transported me via imagery to two far-apart places I know firsthand...  so now, a Jordanian hillside sits in front of my eyeballs humorously juxtaposed next to big Oxnardian circle K, complete with coffee pots and slushy machines |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Amazing imagery and a priceless ending!!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep sharing your scribblenotes... |
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