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dance the wind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Spirit flutes dance a wind song, caress the air in gentlest breeze. I bend my knees, ~worshipping the graces of life~ in mindful moments overcoming strife within the sheer beauty captured in the wind; amber-orange skies, dragon flies, butterflies, all creatures, then and now that rest within the windsongs. Enticing rapturous flute melodies drift over the snowcapped Rockies, across stormy seas. Nature's notes lighten the heavy load of tragedy that weighs down weakened humans every day. Spirit flutes float freely on the winds of time, and in their harmonies, remind us we are not Earth’s rulers but its guests. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we are not Earth’s rulers but its guests. yes...that we are~~  M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I think I've heard that tune before. Nicely done sis. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 to you M, and my brother |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Spirit flutes float freely on the winds of time" I adore the lyrical sway of this piece which certainly hits close to home for me. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read!! I seemed to feel it as I was reading it. I could almost SEE the wind and hear the flute. Excellent writing, Sweetie. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Janette, so nice to have you visit! Glad you can relate to this one. Ethel? what a sweet kind reply! Happy to have you visit! |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
Nature would seem to be the prescription for a weary world warrior. You said it perfectly. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
midnightsun.. Your gentle,loving spirit shows abundantly ... loving this piece, martyjo |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Beautilul Midnitesun, makes be want to be still and listen. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Thanks, I needed this, Midnitesun! ......jo |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"I bend my knees, ~worshipping the graces of life~ in mindful moments overcoming strife within the sheer beauty captured in the wind;" It is to this invisible beauty That I also genuflect, daily- Hailing the energy entity Asking for strength to live by grace. It is, as is, the spinning of a prayerwheel, A form of worship that is little understood. "we are not Earth’s rulers but its guests." We are but parishiners and have taken the words "subdue the earth" out of context- another reason that the written word can only touch on the fringes of meaning-we are rude guests, and our host will throw us out if we don't start behaving.. Your words here show honesty, faith and humbleness-truth in human expression. I enjoyed them. ----------ice/ford ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was so free flowing and colorful credits capturing nature's array how she whispers to us, taps her feet while waiting for us to get jiggy with it! Wonderfully mezmorizing write... |
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