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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-05 07:53 AM

there are only minutes left
in this bottle flu fascination
before addiction is as evident
and my needles begging to be filled

I am a tire with new toys tread
and shiny wheels in my shadows
bend down pretty flower
look under my suspicious suspension

I dare you to race me faster
to the stop sign bedroom windows
double park me beside your comfy camper
and take the time to watch my movies

I am as harmless as rush hour showers

_____________

dark

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-10-05 09:14 AM

interesting write thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2005-10-05 11:12 AM

Wonderful poetry..thank you.

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2005-10-05 08:05 PM

"I am as harmless as rush hour showers"

Me thinks ... NOT!

Ohhhh dark, this was a delight to read!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-10-05 11:13 PM

LOL...while I'm sure you didn't mean it...

quote:
and take the time to watch my movies

where I grew up, I could see the drive-in movie screen if I held my head this way while looking out the window that way from the house where I use to babysit three rug-rats....and I learned back then to lip-read pretty well....

but it was a long time ago - and some of those movies were black and white....

and the faces were pretty much way up close...

and I'm thinking there's some poetry within that remember, somewhere...

but suffice to say,

I'm pretty sure
you didn't mean
all that.

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

5 posted 2005-10-06 10:28 AM

This reads like a lovers secret code.

*smile*

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-10-06 07:31 PM

Oh wow...that was magnetic. Your way with words always astounds me! Beautiful write!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

7 posted 2005-10-06 07:45 PM

That took the breath from me, thank you.

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