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Open Poetry #36

Three Oaks

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-10-04 12:49 PM

Late night
The air is chilled

Water ripples across the lake
Over colored stones

As I stand here
It’s still the same
Nothing’s changed
For all the years

October—
Starlight on her face

Beneath a silver moon

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-10-04 01:04 PM

this is just beautiful keep up the awesome poetry

-may the force be with you in poetry

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-10-04 01:05 PM

Reminded me of home.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-10-04 05:57 PM

lovely thoughts...I have been there...long ago

M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-10-04 06:35 PM

I like how you set thhe mood

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-25 05:08 PM

the calmness stopped the time.

serenity.

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