Open Poetry #36 |
Pointing It Out |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Pointing It Out I erase the feelings triggered by inactions that offend. Pierced by arrowed words some days metered in their send. If pointing out would undo harm, if shadows would subside, the chemistry would spark its will releasing from its hide. Writing words behind the ill are lost in fevers whim. I font these thoughts in type of plain in understanding him. M *senseless thoughts* "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Maureen! I enjoyed reading your *senseless thoughts* ~ Especially the following lines: "I font these thoughts in type of plain in understanding him." I always marvel at your unique turns of phrase! Linda P.S. I hope your teaching school year is going well! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My turning of the phrase is probably due to living among the Pennsylvania Dutch here for over 30 years now... thank you... The subbing for now is going well...I asked to not be called for a few days to get my voice back. I have a bit of the kindergartners' cold and laryngitis. M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynterBliss~ 'I erase the feelings triggered by inactions that offend.' Yes, often 'inaction' hurts worse than 'reaction' to an 'infraction'~ {now THAT's "senseless") I get the gist of it .. honest I do~ Nice to see you lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I erase the feelings triggered by inactions that offend. Pierced by arrowed words some days metered in their send. I am always awed with your words and this sticks out to the point of wanting to use it with a few co-workers I know. But I don't think they would grasp the meaning. Tommy |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Always enjoy your writings Maureen. Hope you are well and happy. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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