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Open Poetry #36

and maybe we could live.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-10-03 02:03 AM

the stars are falling from the sky
and hitting my window
i'll count them for you

the moon is on my shoulder
but i'd rather stay in
with my thoughts like a fireplace

the grass beneath my feet
and the breathing of my walls
envelopes me

i'll try and write my name
with the clouds and the birds
and maybe be could live

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-10-03 02:38 AM

Hope so, exhale. Lovely write.

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-10-03 10:55 PM

very beautiful write thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-10-05 07:09 PM

Lovely...James

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