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| Open Poetry #36 |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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in stars that stare at my lonely sleeping body through a window i am having a realization in dreams. the real world around me has been distorted by the pressure to be someone else and I am failing but so be it. I wasn't supposed to succeed. "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You should not succeed in being someone else.....you should succeed in only being yourself. This poem says that so well.....jo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Reading this poem I believe you already have succeded. Hope you are stilling doing well. Tom |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
There is sadness here, Temptress. A worrysome write. Hope things are going okay! Corinne |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
the only person you need to be is yourself this is a very nice write thanks for sharing |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"I wasn't supposed to succeed" Sorry but I do not agree with you dear dear friend. You may not be getting "there" as fast as you want but you are definitely not at a stand still. You shall succeed, but the success might just be a bit different than you had originally planned. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
If we transformed into someone else ... we wouldn't be ourselves.  Be the best that you can be - that's the answer. Well done. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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