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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-10-02 08:05 PM

Sounds of Dawn

Oh, in those winsome straits of time ago,
I situated some of my own toes
in some there sounds of sand,

where waves were, pounding beats
of this/that heart, hearing, hearkening,
heaving back
to time, rhyme, those signs ago…

has it been this breath, already?
Has it been this embrace, of long ago?

Morn before next night,
it was quite the bared dream
of a sounds of dawn wish, for
life, before knowing
sense, before whim…

it was surely
sounds of dawn before light,
when clarity, when dreams of must
fall silver into shadows of lucidity

when one stands before shadow
and light
on the cusp of course
of course

and all that can be hoped for
is a time
of recollection.

In the sounds of dawn,
when an angel laughs

and only one might feel
the tremble of a body’s
song.

~*~

On the eve of remembering
a very special California memory.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

1 posted 2005-10-02 08:12 PM

Oh, I'm so glad I decided to pop in, 'cuz look what I found! A sparkling seaside gem of a poem!

Hope all is well!

Corinne

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-10-02 09:53 PM

such a delight to read, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-10-02 10:11 PM

Loved your title Kari...
You sure did it justice.
TD

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-10-02 10:17 PM

when one stands before shadow
and light
on the cusp of course
of course

and all that can be hoped for
is a time
of recollection.

In the sounds of dawn,
when an angel laughs

As always....just lovely.
hugs, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-10-03 12:11 PM

Well, SIL, you took me right there! Something very sacred in this awesome writing.

.....jo

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-10-03 12:24 PM

Yes, sissie...you give reverence to more than dawn. This took my breath away!!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-10-03 07:22 AM

one of those places
where the ocean had skin
and the night had hands

lovely place you carry
in your pendent ms

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-10-03 08:53 AM

"it was surely
sounds of dawn before light,
when clarity, when dreams of must
fall silver into shadows of lucidity"

~ Not only are you do you radiate sunshine, you glow with the dawn's early light!

Linda

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

9 posted 2005-10-03 09:26 AM

You are a ray of sunshine, Sunshine. I found this gem of a poem very inspirational. As I struggle to take my life to a higher level. I often feel the road lies in darkness. But I can hear those "Sounds of Dawn" that reassure me I must go on. I loved it, Thanks

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2005-10-03 11:34 AM

Karilea~

I *sigh* at the beauty of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2005-10-03 12:14 PM

Sunshine
You are really shining here.

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

12 posted 2005-10-03 12:57 PM

this is so beautiful thank you for sharing this

-may the force be with you in poetry

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2005-10-04 07:41 PM

Enjoyed...James

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2005-10-04 08:50 PM

"Morn before next night,
it was quite the bared dream
of a sounds of dawn wish, for
life, before knowing
sense, before whim…"

God!, how that rolls off the tongue with language sweetness, as it vibrates over the taste buds...yum! Delicious poetry......

-----------ice
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

15 posted 2005-10-05 08:50 AM

it was surely
sounds of dawn before light,
when clarity, when dreams of must
fall silver into shadows of lucidity

you are the magician of white birds and sunshine, aptly named

a universal dimension...this....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2005-10-05 08:53 AM

Beautiful Karilea.
Awe inspiring.
Lovely you.

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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