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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-10-02 01:33 PM

A song did wail amongst the trees
on high above the glen, where
angels rest and new born cries
ride softly on the wind.

Where crescent moons come there
to rest and lie above the peak, in
wait of that which beckoned them,
those frail and oh so weak.

Where howls the wolf amongst
the pack of fur and haunting eyes,
and maidens wait the oaken door
in want of wanton sighs.

A place of home, a place of rest
that warms the soul and skin, that
brings to bear the warriors cries in
hopes of but to win....

In hopes of but to win....

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-10-02 01:38 PM

sounds like a good old western tale thanks for sharing partner.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-10-02 03:16 PM

AwDearMagnus~
You pen the Maiden's song of lament so very well~

Lovely ..~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-10-02 03:38 PM

BJ, it's so good to read your work today. Very much enjoyed this one.

....jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-10-02 04:17 PM

Oh *SIGH*..beautiful Barry...
Bet you heard that sigh coming out of Canada
and just knew it had to be me right?

Well done..very well done!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2005-10-02 04:51 PM

A stirring write Barry. Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-10-02 05:52 PM

well eh good partner, thanks ye for shareen

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-10-03 09:28 AM

'Tis haunting tale told so well,
~ 'tis tale told so well...

You certainly know how to create an atmosphere, Sir Poe-et!

Linda

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-10-03 11:39 AM

Another awesome tale Magnus my friend.
Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2005-10-03 12:10 PM

Magnus
In hopes of but to win
Well done Barry.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2005-10-03 01:34 PM

Barry, you write this kind of poem so well...the atmosphere that surrounds your words, makes it feel real. Much enjoyed!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-10-04 07:38 PM

Enjoyed...James

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