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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-09-30 12:46 PM

This Sweet Love

When she said,
"sweetheart goodnight,"
I knew it would
be a good night,
because I would
be caressing her
in my dreams.
How long I have waited,
too many times hesitated,
to let love find
its rightful place
within my heart.
Well, no more,
because now that I
know the joy of love,
now that I have felt
the sweet kiss of love,
I don't want to do anything
that will ever let it die,
and I will do everything
in my power, to help
this sweet love survive.

JamesLee
September27
2005

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-09-30 12:51 PM

Good for you.....much enjoyed this write!

.....jo

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2005-09-30 06:32 AM

Indeed, love can be a lot of work to ensure it survives ... you've captured a feeling of hope and determination here James, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-09-30 06:47 AM

A sweet love for a sweet man ... well you do to cherish it, dear James!

Lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

4 posted 2005-09-30 10:05 AM

thats so beautiful! thanks for sharing this incredibly touching poem

i really felt what you were saying!

-may the force be with you in poetry

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2005-09-30 12:27 PM

enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

6 posted 2005-09-30 01:08 PM

Keep at it James and sleep well with a good job done

Bodger

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2005-09-30 02:17 PM

I do believe that you will do just that James.

Much enjoyed this write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

RennieandBoo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 47
Florida!

8 posted 2005-09-30 02:30 PM

I enjoyed it! Kepp up with the good work!!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-09-30 02:37 PM

How long I have waited,
too many times hesitated,
to let love find
its rightful place
within my heart.'''

a positive attitude and a little work will make this a sweet love indeed ...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-09-30 02:43 PM

Very positive outlook you have here James..
I do wish for you the very best...forever.
Heart hugs, Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2005-10-01 04:33 AM

nice, always wishing you the best in life.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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