Open Poetry #36 |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind ![]() |
When the world has been reduced to a dark night just a taste of ashes floating on air light&dark, earth&sky will embrace such beautiful harmony a single petal made for words -- this eternal image of reflection on water tomorrow I will rise early to touch the spread of sun, as the river flows through my fingers my dreams exist just for me the very depth of edges from these walls that rain, will replace your tears, in language only you remember: under stained glass and woven colors scattered over the floor and through the windows nothing will move but the daffodils folding their stems to die ~~**~~ There are moments when speech is but a mouth pressed lightly and humbly against the angel's hands ~~**~~ |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
beautiful! Thanks for sharing> ![]() -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"...somewhat inspired," the lady says..... Me, I'm "somewhat stunned" by this, and once again taking a lesson in how to write poetry which can do that...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Well blended ..... beautiful!! ![]() CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"tomorrow I will rise early to touch the spread of sun, as the river flows through my fingers" Such beautiful imagery, Lauren ... this is a lovely read. Thank you. ![]() Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful write, dear Lauren! quote: Love the melancholy because you render it so masterfully! Love, Margherita |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It's kind of like having sand sift through your fingers reading your poems, soft, smooth, and tickles your innards (well toes in the case of the beach ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Each line is exquisite and lovely in its own "write" ~ a jewel set in a brilliant crown. May the ink in your pen flow for ever more. Love & Light, Linda ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh.. you words always leave me with a sigh and feeling as though i have been touched by something so magical... and beautiful.... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely penning, Greeneyes! |
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