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Open Poetry #36

Adieu

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-27 03:17 AM

Another September
Closes her doors

Beneath the gaze
Of a crescent moon

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-27 06:54 AM

Bonjour tristesse...

but there are the colors of October waiting to welcome us!

Beautiful imagery.

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-09-27 08:03 AM

yes, well done....cannot wait to see the color spectrum of next month...unlimited and most defined, as I'm certain will be your poems of her.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2005-09-27 08:05 AM

Summer ends too dryly
And too wet for some

With winter yet to come
Will we enjoy the color of leaves?

Gloom

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2005-10-09 05:18 AM

smiling in the archives

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-10-09 09:58 AM

I like this one alot

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-25 03:03 PM

too soon to get on the back of November, so one has to sit on the chair of October for a month.

"November

As if on its back
Looking up

A crescent moon"...by Huan Yi.

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