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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-09-26 06:37 PM

Falling Snow

Softly falling into the
essence of her charms.
She giving me more
than enough reasons,
to melt into her arms.
Her essence caressing
and covering me, until
she's the only one
I want to know.
Now I need her
close to me,
desiring her
all around me,
like the beauty
of falling snow.

JamesLee
September25
2005

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-09-26 06:59 PM

Oooh this is lovely James...
Very nice images here.
Hugs~Nancy

*Lucky lady*

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2005-09-26 07:06 PM

Be careful James, talk like that might get you hitched. :-)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-09-26 09:11 PM

Very, very nice James. Enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2005-09-26 10:26 PM

Very nice James

Bodger

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-09-26 10:28 PM

James...There is something magic about snow, and love!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-09-27 03:40 AM

Yes, JamesLee, this one was magical.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-09-27 07:43 AM

quote:
desiring her
all around me,
like the beauty
of falling snow.

hmmmm ... this means something writing from Hawaii ...

a strong desire, indeed.

Lovely, James!

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-09-27 07:59 AM

Beautiful!

She giving me more
than enough reasons,
to melt into her arms.
Her essence caressing
and covering me, until
she's the only one
I want to know.

that was just right and so romantic...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2005-09-27 08:26 PM

This is so pretty, James.
I hope she appreciates your writing these
poems to her.
Hugs,
Ethel

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

10 posted 2005-09-27 10:06 PM

yes this is very nice. thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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