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Robotic. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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My eyes are forced into darkness, my mechanical heart is beating slowly aching for need. Plugs and needles communication woes, I cannot mend myself, you hold my thread and you pull.. the ring no longer fits my lonesome finger, my cold steel lashes blink and I do not weep. And you wonder why, oh why must I be so robotic.. you created me, you imbecile, you pull... I am drained of my pure fuel hunger I yearn for the taste for the incredible sight you pull away my skies and my senses are desperately seeking through the wires. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
knowing this so well...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW~Excellent write Meghan! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Pulls .... CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the ways of communications under stress... Martin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW, Kaoru....."you pulled the thread"....wow, what a write!  ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Excellent! And I can well relate to this. |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
awesome i really liked this |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yes, thats a question I've been asking myself. Why does my mind still intertwine with certain people long after I've been able to say, "I remember that person." Yeah, its that wire, lol. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good to read you again...you have an excellent way with free verse....marvelous writing |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yup, it's always a pleaasure to read you Meg. :hugs; Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
push pull twist wring invite... enjoyed.. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'you created me'--the ultimate accusation and condemnation. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
you created me Great line. This is one of your best. When all is said |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....!!!! Eric |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ache with knowing on this one. Bought the t-shirt twice. Never again! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you my dear, are the absolute opposite of robotic, anyone that could make someone as vibrant seem that way is without a doubt, a &$^% |
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