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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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the promise, so beautifully created was pleasing to behold, but the promise was born broken; crippled from birth the promise didn’t always reach upward but it fought downward with strength more than human and righted itself each time it fell everyone smiled and cheered and oh they did believe in its realization when in finality it lay shattered one too many times God’s mercy and love called Come My child, come home He reached out His arms enfolding the broken pieces and made them whole |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very nice write. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"God’s mercy and love called Come My child, come home He reached out His arms enfolding the broken pieces and made them whole" Hi JB!! It's so good to read you again! A gentle ache to this write with the perfectly inspirational ending. Heart Hugs, Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Acceptance, m'friend... Love, and acceptance... It is good to see you in growth of belief... even though, even now, you might say, "No, it can't be so..." And therein, find these arms in hug.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Next in line to give a hug.... |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
lovely poem i like this alot -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Beans of Jelly ~ "Come My child, come home He reached out His arms enfolding the broken pieces and made them whole" ~ Yes, your child was made whole again and is with you always. Those lines bear repeating. "Come My child, come home He reached out His arms enfolding the broken pieces and made them whole" ~ So incredibly sad. So phenomenally poetic. Sending you an extra warm and comforting hug, Linda |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
awesome...just awesome..great piece. -shane |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How beautiful. And beautifully written. I felt it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Absolutely superb... 'Nuff Sed. When all is said |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriend~ Your tender write of heart reaches out and gathers us in it's beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the promise, so beautifully created was pleasing to behold, but the promise was born broken; crippled from birth So many are... and no amount of work by human hands can right the wrongs. *S* This is wonderful, my friend... beautiful write! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you my suthern friend, it is so good to have you back and thank you all....sigh...this time of year is not easy to pass through... |
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