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xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

0 posted 2005-09-26 02:19 PM

Its all me

It isnt you
Its all me
For of everything i do
It has a reason to be
Just you and me
We shall see
What it leaves

Why i dont talk to you
Is just something that ill do
When i dont have anything else to say
Its just best to stay away
My anger might go out of control
And youll see the essence of my soul
With the fire that burns deep within
It was destined to happen again

Its all me
Its not you
The things i put you through
And when i say im sorry
You always knew
That its all but true

I miss your smile
And for a while
Ive missed your voice
And it feels i have no other choice
But for it to be this way
I guess this is all i have to say
That its not you
Its all me
Everything i do
Has a reason to be
I cant talk to you
Its just best to do
And this is all so true

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-09-26 04:11 PM

and yes it is all true. Perfect wording! and good possitive -vs- the best things you do in certain, situations.. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-09-26 08:21 PM

when nothing better is found to say ...
      it is better to just stay away.

      a truthful shame, but only I to blame ...

                A Great Write!

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

3 posted 2005-09-26 09:18 PM

Awesome write. So full of truth this is. Keep up the great poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

4 posted 2005-09-26 10:02 PM

Glorious write. Welcome to Passions {sorry...I'm sort of late on the welcome wagon}! Your poetry is very emotional...I love it! Can't wait to read more from you!!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2005-09-27 12:12 PM

An excellent mix of light shallow and deep moving between the two quite transparently

Bodger

Obscurity
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream

6 posted 2005-09-27 12:24 PM

I thought the rhyhme scheme worked so well with this that I couldn't stop reading it, it flew very well and I really enjoyed it.

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