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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-09-24 08:09 PM

It's the ones you'll never capture,
though they infiltrate your heart,
the chatter of the leaves
and the peekabo the branches play,
on the tryst that echos as the wind unties,
and how the silence cuts
the thicket of the forest,
and the sycamores were never written,
to be windswept,
if but only for the moment.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-25-2005 08:18 AM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-09-24 08:12 PM

.... just out of touch.

a short but well captured piece

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-09-24 08:21 PM

Perfect beautiful Michele!
Hugs for this keeper, Nancy

Don't tell God how great the storm is..
tell the storm how great your God is.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2005-09-24 11:52 PM

Absolutely exquisite and you covered a lot of territory in such a brief piece. It was truly dynamic description Michelle.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-09-25 02:02 AM

So true, Michelle. Much enjoyed this one.....jo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-09-25 05:52 AM

Once again you have captured my full attention with this magical piece, dear Michele.

Thank you for sharing such beauty.

Love,
Margherita

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2005-09-26 05:24 AM

Inky
The connection of the human spirit with the natural world is at the base of all of my poetry...It is lovely to see that coming from a feminine perspective...

"the chatter of the leaves
and the peekabo the branches play,
on the tryst that echos as the wind unties,
and how the silence cuts
the thicket of the forest,"

Lovely indeed...content and poetic arrangement.

--------------ice
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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-09-26 05:39 AM

yes, like the breeze, when it touches your cheek for a moment . . .

beautiful, Michele

Kevin1999
Junior Member

since 2005-05-10

Posts 14
WV

8 posted 2005-09-26 10:45 AM

I agree, I've read it a half dozen times. Beautiful and magical.

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

9 posted 2005-09-26 11:40 AM

wow that was good

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2005-09-26 02:04 PM

Michele this is an awesome piece, and I am keepin' it! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2005-09-26 05:31 PM

good read

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2005-09-26 09:27 PM

thanks for your look at my world

always appreciated

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

13 posted 2005-09-28 05:28 PM

thanks for your look at my world

always appreciated....

OY...what a world.....nice write

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2005-09-28 08:34 PM

Especially loved the chatter of the leaves...
They speak a language all their own, don't they?

Hugs,
TD

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

15 posted 2005-09-28 09:51 PM

uncapturable is where the miracle lies,
and your words touch that moment...

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

16 posted 2005-09-28 09:54 PM

absublutely wonderful, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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