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Once Upon
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Once Upon Once upon a dreamers night A maiden’s spirit held my sight Dressed in chiffon rose in hew I swore it had the look of you I called your name in whispered awe Reaching out in hearts implore But could not touch my visions view And gasped to see my hand pass through And as you wove this daunting wile While humming in a haunting style Pulling threads of pantomime Sewing webs of future time When suddenly and all too soon Under cascades of the moon Slipping into non exist Like fading notes, an organist And in that moment of extreme I awoke this lovely dream |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I had one of those lovely dreams this morning too, Sy... hugs M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy... may all of your dreams become flesh, and bone... and silky touch...    |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
May you always have wonderful dreams dear Sy. I don't know where Tamarac, Florida is.. But, wherever you are...stay safe. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ That dream must have been loverly. ~ May dreams of sweet, Be your nightly treat! I am surrounding you and your loved ones with protective White Light. Stay safe, my friend. Hugs with love, EA |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
this is what I'm talking about....this is what makes me putty in whomever's hands  husssh don't tell my boyfriend lol If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
oh, I simply love this one  S |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Those dreams......shucks! Don't you just hate it when they end!...Enjoyed this, Sy. (Hoping you are safe.)  ....jo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And as you wove this daunting wile While humming in a haunting style Pulling threads of pantomime Sewing webs of future time When suddenly and all too soon Under cascades of the moon Slipping into non exist Like fading notes, an organist ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Randy says to scratch his belly and sing a lullabye so he can go back to dreaming.  Ya got us all *sighing* with this lovely rhyme scheme dream, me sweet Sy-guy. Pulling threads of pantomime Sewing webs of future time and could that couplets intend be any cooler??? YOU ROCK. *winkiewinkie*     Writers try to capture the exhilaration of Nature & inspiration of Love. The attempts may be futile, the endeavors are all things that is poetry. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
perhaps you should have offered a glass of wine and she might have stayed a bit longer. Enjoyed as always. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved this, my friend!!! *S* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write Sy. I don't know what you ate or drank before going to bed...but I think you should try it again. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
have missed reading you so busy lately and no internet at work yet good to catch up tonight |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
really have missed your words and smiles~ My spirit will rise |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah yes...I see it clearly... a phantom lover held you tight weaving magic all through the night ....A vision to inspire dreams....*big hugs* |
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