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Thoughtful Blues
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Thoughtful Blues |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ With each reflection changes shining through the sunlight set off by streaks and smudges becomes the mourning pane. Until the dial turns halfway burnt orange as an autumn day past the clouds of winter turns to nickle grey. When in your window springs and bends across a field of heather fancy dancing on display forget me not to find a way. Sprinkling showers in aqua hues I will come back to you in bloom when summer comes again you will my thoughtful blues. ~*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Sprinkling showers in aqua hues I will come back to you in bloom when summer comes again you will my thoughtful blues." Oh, Bluesy, this is just lovely!  ....joPS.....still here....Rita is pretty much taking it easy on my part of Houst so far! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Jo's right - lovely, Bluesy! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
beautiful.... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I find myself looking forward to every Blue's note you share ..... ... all are thoughtful, and show tender, loving, care .... any season is the write season!! TY for the read CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade You have grown a beautiful flower of words.  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Life does rebirth, as do we while we wait for life. This is a pleasure to read. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lori How beautifully you write through the seasons! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful expressed images , its springtime over here Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful imagery Bluesy!! Love this one. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Lori! I enjoyed your serenade of "Thoughtful Blues". "Sprinkling showers in aqua hues I will come back to you in bloom when summer comes again you will my thoughtful blues." ~ Those lines are especially loverly! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you sweets for indulging me, and for all your delightful replies. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sprinkling showers in aqua hues I will come back to you in bloom when summer comes again you will my thoughtful blues.'''' ~~~ lovin that.....brings a peace....hugsss you |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
Very nice, i like it :-)
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the yin and the yang of it all somehow we get by  right blondie? |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was just wonderful poetry, very much enjoyed by this reader. When in your window springs and bends across a field of heather fancy dancing on display forget me not to find a way. Write on my friend. Sincerely Rick |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is very hard to top how you write of seasons or sea Lori, just lovely. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The changing of season at this time always brings a touch of melancholy ... yet the beauty only transforms ... and you know and share your emotions so very touchingly, dear Lori. A beautiful write, greatly enjoyed! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I will come back to you in bloom So much said in just this line alone... how very lovely it is to read you Ms Blues. M ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
What a lovely sentiment! Beautiful! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
just lovely thank you verymuch for sharing this with us |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this poem is very nice and thanks for the thought of it. very heartwarming it is. thanks for sharing.Poetry can get you very far |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing, dear Lori. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I should read this once more....to make my average twice a day since you posted it. I don't respond much at PiP anymore, but your words....want you to know I read every one with delight. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely... leaves a feeling of peace. *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 this is too coolto be read only once and it must be read outloud to be fully enjoyed. My not-so-humble-opinion.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ditto to Kacy and Bluesy friend I never cease enjoying the depth of you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
So aptly named, those thoughtful blues. Enjoyed reading you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
I love it.. your poem is so beautiful! I will come back to bloom~ I love it! ^_^ keep up the good write! |
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