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Open Poetry #36

Invade the sanity of me

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-09-24 02:03 AM

so close yet so far
how did I let it
get this way so soon

you broke the rules
you unwritten laws
take my hands and black
out my heart.

Feelings pour out of the
new and reform for you,
why oh why did you have
to do the things you do.

Accidental or not
my heart is bleeding
for your constant touch
your soft embrace when
we touch

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-09-24 09:45 AM

"Accidental or not
my heart is bleeding
for your constant touch
your soft embrace when
we touch"

Such an ache to this piece Julie...
Sending heart hugs your way, Nancy

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-09-24 01:52 PM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2005-09-25 12:00 PM

The constant question of why? Felt the ache is this write. Nicely done.

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

4 posted 2005-09-25 12:04 PM

i really like this poem, looking foward for your next post!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

5 posted 2005-09-25 12:59 PM

thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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