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Open Poetry #36

Leaving Me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-09-24 12:04 PM

Leaving Me

Simply put,
I didn't want
to leave her.
Still, she gave
me little choice,
no reasons to rejoice,
only sadness
and sorrow,
no hope for
tomorrow.
And then she
made the
choice easier
for me,
she didn't
give me the time
to make up
my mind,
she up and
left me.

JamesLee
September23
2005
No...my sweetheart
didn't leave me.
These are old thoughts.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-09-24 12:14 PM

thats sad but good tho.. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2005-09-24 01:22 AM

A nice write but sad my friend, be strong, sometimes it is for the best, if it is meant to go that way.

Sincerely
Rick

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-09-25 10:55 PM

Thank you Angelheart and Rick for the nice responses...
She didn't leave me Rick...these are left over thoughts from a past relationship...James

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (09-26-2005 06:24 PM).]

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