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Symphony 2
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Symphony 2 |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA 
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 Symphony’s I went to were so fun They were so great Letting the music flow Straight Making the Rhythm sound Through your heart That is so special in that part Sharing light Sharing music Sharing good times That is the best thing to do All the way around My boyfriend and I took Pictures by the Manatee’s The most wonderful sight to see The place was at Florida Times Union That was one of the coolest parts to me Poetry can get you very far -Laura |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This was so sweet. I loved it. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I like going to the Symphony, too..  |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
i liked it. especially the manatees |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Laura, I enjoyed your symphony of words! "Sharing light Sharing music Sharing good times" ~ I'll say "Amen" to that! Let the good times roll!  Love & Light, EA  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I enjoyed reading this poem...it put us the readers right there with you...and made us use our imagiations to ''see'' what you were seeing...you didnt go to far over the top with words...you used the correct amount of words to stimulate our imaginary senses and bring your day alive...well done..and welcome to pip.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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