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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2005-09-23 03:45 AM

a mirror is a rare event
a mirror spent in

            contemp
t              or         lation

knifecuts....where
the                       HELL
                did they come
                            from?

my face is memory smooooooooooooth
          is it not?
              not
             not
Not in this mere ROAR

                    exhaling: disgust!
it sounds like sails...
           sending
       this old
face
                    to some
                         ONE

who would appreciate

        IT

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-23 06:06 AM

Intriguing mirror! Our faces reflect our story and our essence. And when we look beyond the “knifecuts” the true beauty surfaces easily … and ONE appreciates IT always …
Good job!
Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-09-23 04:49 PM

wind hitting taut sails
stretched and ready

and you
  smooth butter knife
never jagged
     or
  serrated

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2005-09-23 04:52 PM

I like the way this is all put together, it almost looks like a jumbled backwards image of yourself. I understand.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2005-09-23 05:34 PM

my face is memory smooooooooooooth

oh how i love that line, you have no idea.

Thank you Brian

M

~i want for myself your trembling~

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

5 posted 2005-09-23 07:36 PM

Woah! I like your style Brian. Packs a whallop! I can hear those sails filling from here. I'm all to familar with that exhaling digust. Maybe it's a streak of vanity cause lookin back, I realize I was never that good lookin by anyway. :-)

Whats on the outside will never out weigh what lies within. I hope this thought let some of the air out of your sails. :-)

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2005-09-24 11:45 PM

it sounds like sails...
           sending
       this old
face
                    to some
                         ONE

who would appreciate

        IT

smilin atchoo

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-09-25 05:24 PM

and she do . . .

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2005-10-09 05:05 AM

My god/dess yes

your face is memory smooth--

didn't you feel my hand?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2005-10-09 05:08 AM

um...

that wasn't my hand.

thwack

I love you bri

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2005-11-10 02:45 PM

bump

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2005-11-10 02:49 PM

damn!

it sounds like sails...
           sending
       this old
face
                    to some
                         ONE

who would appreciate

        IT

Incredible writing Brian.  Love the way you pulled this all together.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Lady Goodman
Member

since 2012-10-04

Posts 193

12 posted 2013-08-21 01:28 AM

I wanted it all and I've ended up with nothing.

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