Open Poetry #36 |
Born To Autumn (A birthday poem for Martie) |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Born To Autumn You were born to autumn, took the first day of the time of leaves falling, falling away With an inward knowing you rise to sip the magic from a cup no one sees until you show them Your cup full of moments filled by every feather leaf that comes a-tumbling yellow at your feet I am not made for such a season, the very thought of icetime huddles me within, my foliage drowning into brown But you, you are evergreen, your spring in fall unchanging while the hills lapse into sand, wait dry for the rain Slow perhaps, this green of you, holding steady until the warming but in fall you stand, a bold relief Drink, drink deep and know your unseen cup is real, your time of filling, now |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jaime~ Oh my ... it is as if you sipped the ink from the very well of our Martie~ Happy Birthday, MartieSis~ Thank you for this lovely gift-wrapped beauty for such a beautiful poetic soul~ Knowing already that she will LOVE it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is perfectly beautiful.. and I know Martie is going to love it! Well done...very well done! Birthday hugs going out to Martie and to you for this precious write. ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
How lovely James! As lovely as our sweet Martie. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This is nice.. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderful poem James and a sweet dedication! Happy Birthday Martie! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James, you have me wishing my name is "Martie" instead of "Linda". This eloquent birthday poem is beyond lovely and will surely be treasured by our beloved Martie who is so deserving of such a birthday tribute! ~ Martie, happy birthday wishes from me as well! Linda |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie, dear friend....thank you so much for this wonderful birthday present. You made my day!! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A beautiful birthday wish. believe in what your heart feels... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautifully done...and happy birthday Martie M |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Jamie, you are sooo sweet... I read this out loud to Martie this morning, I happened to be on the phone wishing her a Happy Birthday. A precious gift from one beautiful poet to another. Happy Birthday Martie and a to you Jamie for this. Maree ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, yes, she is born to Autumn...for she is evergreen, arborvitae, tree of life... yes, yes... the perfect present, Jamie! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What an incredibly beautiful gift to our Autumn poetess. Just so elegant as is she. To see real beauty - look with your heart. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
But you, you are evergreen, your spring in fall unchanging while the hills lapse into sand, wait dry for the rain ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh my, how very fitting, and perfectly regal as the woman you write of. Absolutely beautiful writing, James_A. Happy belated Birthday wishes to you Martie girl~ Many many hugs to you both~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
very nice ... a great presence! Happy "B" B-day Martie! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I could ditto EA's response... well... my name's not Linda, but the wishing's the same. *S* This is an incredibly beautiful gift. Martie: I'm sorry I missed your birthday... hope it was a happy one! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a beautiful birthday gift for dear Martie. Happy belated Birthday to you, dear Poetess! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
oh gosh. this is poetry. |
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