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Open Poetry #36

Infatuation

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-07-09 11:50 PM

I wait for a moment,
When I will see your face,
This love becomes desperate,
When others hear my case,

Through utter silence I grieve alone,
Trying to hide the love unknown,

When daylight arrives-
I feel relieved,
Knowing I will see you,
This is what I believe,

But then comes night,
And you are no were in sight,
Each night haunts,
To be with you is all I want.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-07-10 01:32 AM

Nice write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-07-10 05:53 AM

I like it

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2005-07-10 10:57 AM

been there, felt that. oh man!

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2005-07-11 07:10 AM

i know how your feeling.. nicely written...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-07-11 08:36 AM

lovely

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