Open Poetry #36 |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I'm finally real here in this mess Where are you? Brainless, And the wise give thought to their ways Load up on pretty plastic machinery Pretending its real Start fires Smoke flies I just don't know Change the world Make it just the way I like it Seasonal pounding powder, powder, powder Tuck and roll Run like Hell... Can I trust you? Will you tell, or can you keep a secret? (whisper)..."i'm starting a fire tonight..." Dangerous overtones, screaming "arrhhh!!!!" I give you the truth A flat level piece of solid you can stand on You're cursing God, yourself, me, the trees, birds... We can walk a little farther And touch a little more... Then we can dance until death do us part Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Craig indeed nice to see you posting in open....there is a lot within this, and between the lines....enjoyed these words, and thoughts.... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Very deceptive Good words Bodger |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
well interesting. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh my...that was emotionally wrought! I just want to say...I aspire to be a poet! That's all!! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Greeneyes- Yeah, I like posting in Open, I posted in dark for so long cause, I used to be a really dark person, but the Bible changed me. Bodger-Yeah, kinda like different parts of life. Angelheart- Thank you. How are the hurricanes in Florida? We're about to get a big one! yv- Wow, thats a compliment. Thanks Thank you for your compliments. You guys rock. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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