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sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

0 posted 2005-09-20 10:53 PM

I am so simple minded
That everybody
Still thinks of me
As a child

When they look at
Or listen to me
They think me
A teenager

But that really
Does not bother me
I accept it as
A compliment

I know I am not
As smart
As other people
But that does not bother me either

I just accept
That I am a kid at heart
And having a simple mind
Does not hurt

Poetry is beauty in words.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-09-20 11:10 PM

I know I am not
As smart
As other people
But that does not bother me either

Oh Julie trust me, smarter then most!

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2005-09-20 11:27 PM

Very cute poem! I commend you for embracing your inner child. It simply means you are still enjoying life, which is a good thing.

*Meredith

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2005-09-21 12:10 PM

Simply put, outspoken, Honest! BEAUTIFUL!

AL

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-09-21 11:28 AM

Julie, in all respects there is a beauty inwardly which glows far above the intellectual...and one can be intellectual, but not be very pretty at all...yanno?

hugs

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

5 posted 2005-09-21 12:28 PM

this is very good.... and yes it is good to be a child at heart. Thanks for sharing. Missie Julie!

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-09-21 01:22 PM

Well done Julie!
And always let that child inside you show through!

Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-09-21 02:33 PM

A simple mind grasps the essence of things in a clearer way than many an intellectual mind.

But you know what's really smart? If you were really "simple" you would not be able of this kind of consciousness.

I think you are beautiful and I love the child who surfaces so sweetly.

Love,
Margherita

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