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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-20 07:27 AM

I searched for thee today there
at the seam of a smudged dawn
and her shiver sleeved evening

where was thy voice's euphony
where were the sooth skinned songs
that you bring from the quiet places

did you not see my mountains
did you not hear the meander
of my windspun desert when it moaned

why did you ignore my raftses streams
and why did you step over my ramping rivers
letting your purity condemn them bitter

who wore thy gems this day, o' lovelorn summer

_____________
dark

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-09-20 07:32 AM

"the seam of a smudged dawn"

I loved that vision..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-09-20 07:37 AM

where was thy voice's euphony
where were the sooth skinned songs
that you bring from the quiet places

did you not see my mountains
did you not hear the meander
of my windspun desert when it moaned

softly written m'friend
and just how could anyone/thing
ignore you??

Hi from Pa to Ca!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-09-20 08:19 AM

When this time of year
rolls 'round again
come next,

bring this back for me...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-09-20 09:44 AM

meandering sounds can be heard...from way before...brought in towards the center being...the inner sanctity of what is...

anyway, this is what sounded loudest to me this morning.

Wonderful writing

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-09-20 10:31 AM

DS

"I searched for thee today there
at the seam of a smudged dawn
and her shiver sleeved evening"

Just lovely!