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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Come rain Let the sky release it’s hoarded vigor Pour the feelings of a red dawn to this earth Fill bucket and stream to the banks and beyond the brim Come rain Let down the glass blue tears of surrender Soak the soils to saturation, unfaltering upon the maple glade Shower every blade of wheat, every copper leaf upturned Come rain Shake the essence of a noble fast; sate the thirst of desert cast Dye the lifeless hours slicker, lush upon the lips come quicker Fill the empty well up in advantage; spill a river’s rampage Come rain Wet the bark of emissary oak; quiet down the crimson roaring stoke Silence all the wild that paces, finger laces, wash away Swell the rose hips in a deluge spent today Come rain Come rain Come Copyright Kkh 09/19/05 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa, in the mist we shall unveil our own truth... this: Soak the soils to saturation, unfaltering upon the maple glade Shower every blade of wheat, every copper leaf upturned imagination leashing great guidence powerfully enriching! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a fervent invocation indeed, dear TD! Powerful, great write. Love, Margherita |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW...stunning words calling upon nature...I felt like I was transported to witness how the forgotten tribes called upon nature to grant their requests...I love the vision this poem took me to....*big hugs* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Come rain Shake the essence of a noble fast; sate the thirst of desert cast Dye the lifeless hours slicker, lush upon the lips come quicker Fill the empty well up in advantage; spill a river’s rampage" Sounds like the perfect Rain Dance to me, TD!  ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, there is thrumming magic in those words! I enjoyed the read very much! ~ and I also enjoyed reading the wonderful replies that you have received! EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Come rain indeed! I really enjoyed this TD! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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