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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-09-18 10:23 PM



The moon
The sun
The color blue
Those countless angels
In the sky

To who
Or what
Did in fact
Create these things
I offer worship
And a sigh


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-09-19 03:26 PM


thought provoking...nicely said
Startime55
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2 posted 2005-09-19 03:32 PM


I join you in the awe your sigh weaves...Wonderful writing...**big hugs**

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-09-20 08:26 AM


Ditto.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

iliana
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4 posted 2005-09-21 03:40 AM


Much enjoyed.
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-25 05:40 PM


daily life.

poem of plain life. so poem is better.

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