Open Poetry #36 |
Dim Bones |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Water, water for these bones for tongues erupt in sizzling hot torment pon fragile skin allergens of conflict surround me tis the season, I know tis the season, but I am not jolly wearisome relationships, all burdenous, most. From outside, daggers come in From inside, they hate my health, all 'join us in this condemning, yea this loathing!' again, I'm aware "that there, my own reflection stares" So I wish for deaf drown out hungry eyes, eyes despise, demanding cries loaded sighs endless list whys packed neatly in denies I try but often fail with "hail yeah" hand jive raised toward sky in soul splitting high five at the stumbling of me, crumbling of me, foot on the neck of grumbling me for I deserve, you see... water, water for these bones these dry and weary bones ~Tier 9/05 "I don't need your vote, just somewhere to express my opinions" ~R.T. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is a good read. thanks for sharing... Poetry can get you very far |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks for taking the time to read it, Laura. ~tier |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tier? This totally blew me away, the entire thing but especially starting here and all the way to the end . . . mouth hanging wide open here . . . So I wish for deaf drown out hungry eyes, eyes despise, demanding cries loaded sighs endless list whys packed neatly in denies I try |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write, Tier....and very original, too. ......jo |
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