Open Poetry #36 |
The stinky water chant |
adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
The stinky water chant Stinky water, stinky water all around Stinky water, stinky water makes me frown Stinky water, stinky water in my town stinky water, stinky water please go down adagio |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
One would think you live in Moose Jaw, Saskatchewan! Definately the worst water in our province I've ever had . . . it has floaties in it. It's nice to read something light-hearted. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An apocalyptical chant. A terrible situation, no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
LOL now this one kinda is funny.. It makes me think of sarcasium for some reason.. I did enjoy the getleness in the poem... Thanks for sharing.......... Poetry can get you very far |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
adagio...I know what you mean, I went thru Camille in 69 and everything had a terrible smell about it you never forget. The best thing is too burn it or throw it away...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my guess is, New Orleans, weighed heavy on your mind while writing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Please keep that chanting head of yours above the contaminated, stinky waters! I admire your spirit. It must be like Hell down there. Wishing you all the best. Hugs with love, Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
So it's getting to you too, eh? Don't drink the stuff Ralph. We've got our eye on Rita now. Had planned to go back this week, but I just heard this storm has 15 projected paths. At least we can head north from here if need be. I'm homesick tho, but glad to hear you are maintaining your humor. Not sure where you posted that from, but if it's the Westbank, sweetie, I'm not gambling on the levees ever again. Get outta there. Love you bro. Stay safe. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
rita missed us in south florida.. looks like its headed for houston.. good luck with the flooding.. im sorry to hear that its still there. nastyness |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yuck! I muck out horse stalls and water buckets, and the arean sometimes....so I am familiar with SMELLY stuff but iffn you wanna come to Oregon for a few days for yer honeymoon? just holler |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I'm so sorry about what happened to your beautiful city! I was just there not a week before the hurricane hit, and now it is so surreal to think that everything is under "stinky water". *sniff Keep your chin up! (no pun intended) *Meredith I'm not your type, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Definitely understand this...remembering a major flood from when I was a kid. |
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