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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

0 posted 2005-09-18 04:50 PM

Magic-
          in the mystic moonlight
from dolphin's mouth crystal waters arch -
moonbeams dance in silver ripples
under a canopy of lilac blossoms..
a bench invites romance ~
glow-worms between branches flicker
their little lanterns
           in a ceremonial dance.

Hands   move gently - voices whisper
lips discover love's sweet mead
hearts in joyous rhythm beat
passion grasps with hungry arms
          captive love in fierce embrace.

Hide not your mystic face   pale moon
dawn's victory comes all too soon.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-09-18 05:06 PM

This is very good.. Thanks for sharing..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-09-18 05:29 PM

This is so beautiful. I loved it.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-09-18 05:35 PM

Dear Nancy, you share a most romantic beautiful scenery.

True magic.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2005-09-18 07:15 PM

Tinker this is very romantic. The images are beautiful. Care to take a moonlight stroll?

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-09-18 08:44 PM

Just lovely Nancy Lee.
Much enjoyed. Hugs & Miss Ya.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2005-09-18 10:16 PM

Nancy, this is just beautiful. So romantic.

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

7 posted 2005-09-19 12:23 PM

Moonlight romance
Fireflies to dance
Couples will prance
Moonlight enhance.

Well written! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-09-19 12:28 PM

This is gorgeous, Nancy....very romantic....yummmmm.

....jo

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2005-09-19 06:53 AM

Though the form may be modern, at its heart, this poem seeps the blood of Byron and Shelly...The things of Romance might change, from generation to generation...but the spirit of it does not... as is shown so plainly in this poem...

The picture fits the poem well, invites the story, yet for some reason I see the ghost of
Keats, sitting on the bench, lamenting..

"The day is gone, and all its sweets are gone!"

enjoyed
------------ice
><>

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2005-09-19 07:50 AM

this flowering romantic write, brings peace to the heart, to the soul, to keep forever when winds blow cold. Amazing....this and you...bout time you write Lady Jane, as I've missed reading you...thank you for this beauty

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

11 posted 2005-09-19 10:30 AM

Nancy...Tender sweet words from a master. Thanks for sharing this with us...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2005-09-19 10:56 AM

Enchanting One

Earth Angel

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2005-09-19 03:11 PM

a place to ponder....beautiful thoughts and images....

pretty lady...

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2005-09-19 03:28 PM

You weave the magic of moonlight and romance beautifully...I love it....**big hugs**

Waterfall27
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since 2005-06-24

Posts 98
Ontario , Canada

15 posted 2005-09-19 06:29 PM

This is so beautiful

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2005-09-19 06:38 PM

You are all so very special to me...
your comments are appreciated more than you know.
~Love, Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

17 posted 2005-09-20 08:19 AM

Especially loved the picture to go with the words...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

18 posted 2005-09-21 07:22 PM

great poetry Nancy - you write it so very very well - loved it - Paul

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

19 posted 2005-09-21 09:22 PM

hi Nancy! man ive missed readin your writting glad i dropped in tonight to see some

Time brings change and change comes with time

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

20 posted 2005-09-21 11:34 PM

Thank you all once again for your kind replies!

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

21 posted 2005-09-22 12:20 PM

"Hide not your mystic face pale moon
dawn's victory comes all too soon."

so beautifully written!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

22 posted 2005-09-22 01:25 PM

A soothing and romantic poem. This month's moon is so bright and invites lots of fantasies of romance.

I enjoyed this so much. Hugs, Marti

Living simply and calmly in the mountains!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

23 posted 2005-09-22 11:37 PM

i love the dance in this
beautiful setting
can see you there in your twinkle toes

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