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In willful protection
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In willful protection |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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In willful protection of the passion love inspires when memory like the sky hangs silently alive the reservoir of feeling only a woman owns stretches and enlarges to full capacity. From this store the dribble of frustrated hopes and the leak of dreams not yet manifest until a red, red rose in the garden of soul speaks of an easy bleed from the ill at ease. Sharpened insight to the start of spirit life and a slide over skin the way a sinner goes like automatic replay in a conscious mind to the drip of droplets from this reservoir. Mindful every day of hope’s splash and dash and aware of no reserve to sustain the flow the reservoir of soul prepares to decompose silently and stealthily behind the obvious. In willful protection the body knows to grow but it cannot stop the soul from rotting down below! Helen / 18 September 2005 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"like automatic replay in a conscious mind to the drip of droplets from this reservoir." How well you say it, Helen. But, I am hoping that the soul doesn't rot....I think it reaches a point where it just takes a break. Maybe it is the "passion" part that rots. I really liked your thoughts and the title is perfect. I really do know where you are coming from, tho'.  ....jo |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
I loved the emotion in this piece. Beautifully written. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very creative... thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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