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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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here the wind is, spoon-shaped: she stirs the trees, she scoops the sea and swift-flys the gulls, to infinity she lashes her woes sings her wild, the long-slow groan of birth here the wind, gathers the rivers like birds, and flocks them into an early spring-time migration she messes my hair like vines and sometimes..... she is my friend when her summer-time breath greets me with the fragrance of yellow unfolding like a flower and the voice of bells blossoming in the distance now and then, she makes me happy and flaps my weeping dry like clothes on the line, in spin of merry-go-round. ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooh Maree....this is delightful! Filled to the brim with wonderful imagery. It's so good to read you again.. may we ask for more..please? Hugs pretty lady~ I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maree....I think this is my favorite of yours to date! It is brilliant and lovely! Every line held a treat!  ....jo |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Maree, Gotta say I really enjoyed this and could picture the wind working its magic on you. Lovely. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Excellent work as usual, Maree. Love the imagery. Billy 8) "If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Nancy, Jo, Larry and Billy..... You make me smile Thank you for stopping by and your wonderful replies.  M xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree "when her summer-time breath greets me with the fragrance of yellow unfolding like a flower and the voice of bells blossoming in the distance now and then, she makes me happy and flaps my weeping dry" The wind can make you high or low...the highs are wonderful! Wonderfully descriptive poem! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o she does that doesn't she........a whirling write of a windswept delight. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
loved the ending.. thanks for sharing Poetry can get you very far |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
I felt the emotion in this piece. Awesome write. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*boo* ahhh, as you greet summer, I bid her farewell. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amo questo tuo vento! Brava! Love, Margherita  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This is awesome! Delicious, rolling off the tongue... Fine form , complimenting the content; The reader is there, feeling the wind with you. enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Damn Bella, you blew me away with the imagery in this... I could feel that breeze touch my shoulders from here... One of your best, Im keepin it. Miss ya gal! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautifully written, DA... ~tier |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done, your words takes the reader to relive an experience with you...enjoyed! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and sometimes..... she is my friend" sometimes she is my only friend... always very well said Maree... much  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Martie, yes the highs are wonderful, thank you Honeysuckle Ms Ink, always love your replies..thank you. Angelheart, glad you enjoyed sweetpoetess, thanks for the 'Awesome' Suzie, Boo! back at ya, hehe. where ya bin? you bid her farewell, i welcome her. Margherita, Grazie tante per il tuo occhie, e parole gentile. Baci. hey ice, thank you for your lovely words, i hope the wind was gentle over you. Glad you enjoyed. Bella, hope i didn't blow you too far away, *smile* thank you honey. Tier, thank you so much. LeeJ, thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it. Susan, how's doing sweets? Thanks for your lovely reply. Thank you all for popping in and reading and your lovely replies/comments. m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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