Open Poetry #36 |
North |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Suddenly now The sliding door is closed The fan unplugged from the wall So one no longer Seeks ice for the glass And thinks instead of straight liquor To go outside Is to be fully clothed Long sleeved long coated Against the cold With blanket upon The bed again A burrow for the mole |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
----Huan Yi---- This is another well written one.. Thanks for sharing... Poetry can get you very far |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Winter must be coming your way! Enjoyed the read - thanks. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I know the feeling...I am not a lover of the cold but one cannot stop as it flows back into our lives....well said...**big hgus** |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, soon out will come the quilts and human hibernation begins. Well done and enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
typical winter mind but talk too loud in early fall. enjoyed |
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