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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-16 01:56 AM



Suddenly now
The sliding door is closed
The fan unplugged from the wall

So one no longer
Seeks ice for the glass
And thinks instead of straight liquor

To go outside
Is to be fully clothed
Long sleeved long coated
Against the cold

With blanket upon
The bed again
A burrow for the mole


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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-16 08:23 AM


----Huan Yi----
    This is another well written one.. Thanks for sharing...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2005-09-16 08:58 AM


Winter must be coming your way!  Enjoyed the read - thanks.
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2005-09-16 11:51 AM


I know the feeling...I am not a lover of the cold but one cannot stop as it flows back into our lives....well said...**big hgus**

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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-09-16 01:51 PM


Yes, soon out will come the quilts and human hibernation begins. Well done and enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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5 posted 2007-04-25 09:01 PM


typical winter mind but talk too loud in early fall.

enjoyed

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